talaash main udaas raasta hoon shaam ka..
teri aahaton ki talaash hai..
ye raaste hai sab bujhe bujhe..
mujhe jugnuon ki talash hai..
main aansu hoon us aankh ka..
jise apno ki talaash hai..
in sunsaan veeraniyon mein mujhe.,..
apni mehfilon ki talash hai.,..
main daraar hoon us mitti ka..
jise nami ki talaash hai...
is sookhe aasmaan mein mujhe...
kaale baadlon ki talaash hai...
main antarman hoon us insaaan ka..
jise "aham" ki talaash hai...
hai brhamaan(universe) krishna mein
aur krishna hai mujhme...
mujhe brahamaan mein "swayam" ki talaaash hai..!!
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simply awesome..............!!!
ReplyDeletei really really never ever xpectd such awesome work from u atleast.. n dat in dis field.....
its too good............!!
i already told u...dat its relly a gud work done by you..shwos a poet's deep thinkin!!..very remarkable...!!.keep it up....
ReplyDeletehey i didnt knew ds quality of urs
ReplyDeletemind blowing job
keep it up
thanks ppl fr all ur comments... :)
ReplyDeletewonderful work yaar....
ReplyDeletei really lyk this one..
lage rahoo
m really not able to resist myself frm postin another comment for dis poem.. evrytime i read it i seem to like it more.. its jus awesome!.. the lines "main aansu hoon us aankh ka..jise apno ki talaash hai.." and "hai brhamaan krishna mein..aur krishna hai mujhme...
ReplyDeletemujhe brahamaan mein "swayam" ki talaaash hai..!! " r really really mind-blogging.!!! dis s one of d best poems dat i hv ever read.. its simple n so so very deep...... absolutely fantastic work!!!
this one is really unbeatable n surely the best one .specially the last para is awesome.gr8 writing and intellect.keep up the good work!!
ReplyDeletethnkss again.. fr ur valuble comments.. :)
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